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Monday, January 23, 2017

Day 85: 1/23/17 - D Day: Drafting Poetry - Rules to Live by Poem

Good day 6th Graders,      
         Welcome ladies and gentlemen. As we continue unit 2 about Critical Analysis & Evaluation of Informational Texts we will be working on writing some of our own poetry. Please make sure you have:
  • Red Folder
  • Agenda
  • ELA Notebook
                        Thank you ,
                        Mr. Trumble

Do Now: 
1. Make sure you have all your materials
2. Sharpen pencils
3. Review Kipling's rules to live by. Which rule has the most meaning to you? Why? Now think about something that you would like to write rules about. What rules would you write? Turn and talk with an elbow partner about these questions. Please work quietly so you don't disturb others.


Drafting a Poem about Rules to live by

Who likes poetry?
Who likes music?

Think back to all the types of figurative language we learned about in Unit 1. Many of those various forms of figurative language can be found in music. 

Part 1:
(Notebooks)
As you watch the video make a bulleted list of the different forms of poetic devices you see and hear.
What types of poetic devices did you see and hear in the video?

Part 2:
Think about Kipling's rules to live by, and Bud's rule to survive the Great Depression.

Now think about your life and ALL the parts of your life. 
What rules would you write?

Ex: Rules to...
  • to survive 6th grade
  • to survive the Great Depression
  • to play hockey
  • to succeed in color-guard
  • to be a Packers fan
  • to be a dancer
  • to be a good hunter
What are your rules to __________ ?
Let's brainstorm some other things we could write rules for. 
(Notebooks)
Standard RL.6.9 Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics.
Now....Before you write here are two people who have also written poems giving rules to live by. The first is by Mother Theresa, a very famous woman who passed away in 1997. She gave her life to studying the bible and spreading kindness throughout the world. Here is her poem titled, "Do It Anyway." As you watch think about how her poem is similar to Kiplings. Pay attention to her rules and be prepared to share what rules you see or hear.


Here is another poem, and similar to the way Kipling wrote rules to his son, this poem was written by a mother who is giving rules to her daughter. As you watch think about how her poem is similar to Kiplings. Pay attention to her rules and be prepared to share what rules you see or hear.

(Show Samples of previous student poetry)

Now..... It is your Turn!
Part 3:
  • Standard W.6.4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
  • Standard W.6.10 Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.

Your task:
Draft a poem about your own rules to _____ .

*Unlike paragraphs, poems are written in stanzas. Stanzas use something called Line breaks. When you are writing your own poem, think about how it rhymes, (it doesn't have to rhyme) or how it is structured, and insert your line breaks. You may refer to other student samples to see how they did it, or look at your poem by Kipling. 

We will be drafting several poems throughout the week and you will be selecting at least 2 of them you want to edit/revise for our poetry reading. The Poetry Reading will be next Wednesday or Thursday. Each of you will need to get up and recite at least 2 poems to the class!! Happy Writing!

Homework:
  • Finish writing your poem about "Rules"
  • Read for 20 - 30 minutes from your independent reading book


RTI - D Day 1/23/17
Step 1 - Pick up an article. We will be choosing an article to do together as a whole group.
Step 2 - Read through your article to get a basic understanding of what the article is about.
Step 3 - Reread the article a 2nd time and use the Highlighting and annotating Strategy.

Step 4 - Complete the Main Idea Graphic Organizer
***When you are done you will bring your work to me and we will conference about your article. I will be asking:
1. What is the topic of your article?
2. What is the topic sentence?
3. What is the Main Idea?
4. What supporting details led you to think that?
Step 5 - Write a summary

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