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Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Day #122 - 3/29/16 - Unit 3: Mini-Essay - Critical Analysis & Evaluation of Informational Texts & Poetry

Good Morning Sixth Graders,
          Today is a B day so we will go to Art. We will also work on our essay about how Bud's life has changed, and learn about slavery in Ancient Greece.
Please...
  • Order your lunch
  • Sharpen your pencils
  • Make sure you have all materials
  • Hand in your True/False Quiz
                                     Thank you
                                     Mr. Trumble
P2P: 
1. Today is a Trivia Tuesday

Activity #1
(We Do)
9:00 - 9:30
Gold Fever & Gold Miners Tale

Directions: Use the Accountable Talk protocol to collaborate with a group of your peers to discuss your responses from Gold Fever and the Gold Miners Tale. Be sure you locate evidence in the text to support your answers.


Activity #2
(You do)
9:30 - 10:00
Key Question:
How has Bud's life changed?


Written Response:(You do)
Write a mini essay to answer the question. 

Compare Bud's life in Flint Michigan with his life in Grand Rapids, Michigan. How has Bud's life changed?
Use IDEC Format to help you construct your paragraphs.
I - Introduction
D - Details (Your own words)
E - Evidence (Exact words from the text)
C - Conclusion/Reflection


Criteria:
paragraph 1 - Introduction
A good introduction grabs the readers attention!!!!
**You may want to start with...
  • a question
  • an amazing fact
  • a direct quote
  • Figurative language
You must include your claim!!!
  • Example of claim = Now that Bud is living in Grand Rapids with Herman E. Calloway’s band his life is different from when he was living in Flint.
Paragraph 2 - Details
  • Give 1 to 2 details about how Bud’s life has changed
    • Describe what Bud’s life was like in Flint.
    • Describe what Bud’s life is like now in Grand Rapids.
    • Use evidence to support your thinking
    • Provide a conclusion/reflection
Paragraph 3 - Details
  • Give 1 - 2 more details about how Bud’s life has changed
    • Describe what Bud’s life was like in Flint.
    • Describe what Bud’s life is like now in Grand Rapids.
    • Use evidence to support your thinking
    • Provide a conclusion/reflection
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
  • Reflect on how Bud’s life has changed
  • Has his life changed for the better or the worse?
  • What is Bud’s future going to be like?
Example (I do)

          Would you be willing run away from your foster home to follow your heart to try to make your dreams come true? In the Novel Bud, Not Buddy, that is exactly what the main character does. Bud risks it all so that he can go find his father in Grand Rapids. Now that Bud is living in Grand Rapids with Herman E. Calloway’s Band his life is very different from when he was living in Flint.  
          When Bud was living in Flint he had to live in an orphanage, or at a foster home with people who didn’t treat him well, like the Amoses. The Amoses were so mean to him they locked him in a shed, and Bud had to escape from the shed in the middle of the night. In Grand Rapids Bud gets to live with Miss Thomas and Herman E. Calloway. He even gets his own bedroom to sleep in. In addition, Bud gets to hang out with all of Herman E. Calloways band members, and learns how to play music with them.  
          In Flint when Bud escaped from the Amoses he had to go on the lam and go to the mission to get many of his meals. The mission is a place where men, women, and children who have no money and nothing to eat could go to receive a free meal, and it was always the same thing to eat for everyone. In Grand Rapids Bud gets to go out to eat in restaurants where he gets to order anything he wants to eat. 
          Since leaving Flint for Grand Rapids Bud’s life has improved greatly. Someday Bud might even become a famous musician if he keeps practicing. Although he wasn’t able to fulfill his dream of finding his father, I think he is going to love living with his grandfather Herman E. Calloway, even if his grandpa is a bit on the grumpy side. Maybe Bud and Herman living together will change Herman’s life as much as it has already changed Bud’s.
Activity #3
(You do)
10:00 - 10:30 
Practice Test - Day 1: Multiple choice
Directions: Read each of the passages an complete the multiple choice literal and inferential questions. 

Homework:
Finish first draft of your mini-essay

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