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Monday, January 31, 2022

Day 89: 1/31/22 - Introduction to Persuasive Essays

 Good day 6th Graders,      

        Please make sure you have all your materials. Today I will be introducing you to persuasive Writing.
                        Thank you ,
                        Mr. Trumble       
Do Now:
  • Empty Out your ELA Folder
  • Write down your homework
Homework:
  • Think about a topic for your persuasive essay 
    Activity #1
    Writing a Persuasive Essay

    Standards
    RI6.8 - Trace and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, distinguishing claims that are supported by reasons and evidence from claims that are not.
    W6.1 Write arguments to support claims with clear and relevant evidence.
    a. Introduce a claim & organize the reasons and evidence clearly.
    b. Support your claim using credible sources and demonstrate understanding of the topic.
    c. Use words, phrases, and clauses to clarify the relationships among claims and reasons.
    d. establish and maintain a formal style.
    e. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from the argument presented.


    1. Glue In Title Page & Tab
    • What is Persuasive Writing?

    2. Glue in & Review the Information Writing Checklist
    • How will my writing be evaluated?

    3. Watch the video for a brief overview of a Persuasive Essay


    4. Preview the Persuasive Essay Outline/Checklist



    5. Brainstorming Topics: Quick-List

    * A good persuasive essay topic should be an issue that you care strongly about. The best persuasive essays are often about an issue that is controversial, meaning that people often disagree about the topic. Let's create a quick list of possible topics for your persuasive Essay. (5Minutes)

    Ex: 
    • Healthy School Lunches
    • Vending machines in schools
    • Dress codes
    • Shorter school days
    • Longer school year
    • gun laws
    • Mall curfews for children underage
    • Covid Vaccine Mandates
    • Mask Mandates
    • Remote Learning
    • Minimum Wage

    6. PERSUASIVE ESSAY GRAPHIC ORGANIZER
    • Choose a topic to focus on for your persuasive Essay
    • Write a YES/NO question for your research.
    • Each issue/topic has at least 2 sides, or arguments. Write down the two sides to your issue, or topic.

    Before we can write a thesis statement or develop our research question we need to gather information about our topic.

    Thesis statement = Your Opinion. This is your "I think, I believe, I feel," statement. THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT SENTENCE OF YOUR ESSAY! WE WILL COME BACK TO THIS SENTENCE LATER.


    7. Key Words & Search Questions
    • You need to write at least 5 key words & 5 Key Questions that you can use with the databases

    8. Research
    You will need to find at least 2 - 3 resources that you can use to support your thinking. This is where you will use the library databases to find articles to support your opinion.



    Follow these steps
    Step 1: Use the databases provided through the school library
    Step 2: Use your keywords graphic organizer and search for articles that will help you support your opinion.
    Step 3: Once you begin researching select an article based on the title, and on the name of the resource.
    Step 4: Preview the information by scanning through the information, looking at the text features, and getting the gist of the article.
    Step 5: If you like the article send the article to your google drive. Be sure to also send the citation
    Step 6: Read the article closely and complete your "Gathering information" graphic organizer. When you complete this graphic organizer you are looking for information, data, and evidence that will help you prove that your opinion about your topic is the correct opinion. However, you need to make sure you understand both sides of the argument so read information about both view points.

    9. Write a thesis Statement
    Now that we have gathered information for our topic we can write a thesis statement. 

    Thesis statement = Your Opinion. This is your "I think, I believe, I feel," statement.

    ***Be sure to include a brief explanation of 'why'. This is where you will input your 3 reasons you will expand on in your essay.

    Ex:
    I believe that all elementary students should receive at least 30 minutes of recess every day, because they will be able to be more attentive, more productive, perform better, and be more well-behaved in class


    10. Outlining
    Use the Writing a Persuasive Essay Checklist along with the Outline to begin planning your essay. REMEMBER, THE OUTLINE IS JUST THAT, AN OUTLINE. IT IS NOT THE PAPER ITSELF. YOU WILL BE USING YOR OUTLINE TO THEN WRITE WELL STRUCTURED PARAGRAPHS. 

    To Complete the Outline:
    • Start with the Thesis
    • Then put in your 3 reasons (From your thesis)
    • Go from beginning to end
    • You may skip parts and come back to them later
    • Be sure to include your sources
    • Use your Checklist if you are unsure about what to do
    • You do not need to write in complete sentences 



    11. Drafting
    • USE YOR OUTLINE TO WRITE WELL STRUCTURED PARAGRAPHS. LET THE CHECKLIST BE YOUR GUIDE. YOU CAN SEE THAT YOU WILL NEED 6 PARAGRAPHS!
    • I WILL MODEL HOW TO GET STARTED!
    • You May Write on line paper, but I would highly encourage you to complete your draft in a Google Document. That way we can save it along the way, so then editing & revising will be easier.
    • Drafting should take us about 2 days
    Drafting - Paragraphs 1, 2, & 3
    Drafting - Paragraphs 4, 5, & 6
     

     



      12. Editing & Revising
      Editing & Revising - Phase 1
      • Independent - Use the checklist in your notebook
        • Make sure that you have all required parts
        • Make sure you have enough sentences in each part
        • Make sure you have included your sources
      • Partner - Use the checklist in your notebook & repeat the process with a writing partner
      • Repeat the process again with another writing partner
      • Partners job is to help make the paper better
      9. Editing & Revising - Phase 2
      • Independent - Repeat phase 1 with the next checklist
      • Partner - Remember your job is to help make the writing better
      10. Editing & Revising - Phase 3

      Your Task: Edit and Revise:
      1. the Introduction & the Conclusion
      2. Body Paragraphs that support your thinking
      3. Body paragraph that addresses the people who think differently

      Use the checklist to evaluate your own writing.

      Part 1 - Edit & Revise your essay by yourself. 
      Part 2 - Edit & Revise your essay with a writing partner
      Part 3 - Edit & Revise your essay with a 2nd writing partner



      General areas to Edit & Revise:
      • Check spelling
      • Check Grammar
      • Did you vary your sentence structure? (Short, medium, long)
      • Did you use conjunctions to make compound sentences? (And, but, or)
      • Elaboration - Have you elaborated on all your ideas to be specific about your ideas?
      Intro:
      • Does your introduction have a hook, background info, and a strong specific thesis statement with 2 parts?
      • What transition words did you use?
      • Where can you add transition words?
      • Did you clarify vocabulary words?
      Body Paragraph 1 - 3:
      • Do your body paragraphs clearly state your reasons?
      • Do they have Evidence?
      • Have you elaborated and explained your evidence in detail?
      • Have you included your sources? 
      • Is there a link connecting your evidence to your reason?
      • What transition words did you use?
      • Where can you add transition words?
      • Did you clarify vocabulary words?
      Body Paragraph 4:
      • Did you present the opposing side of the issue?
      • Did you use language like: I know, I understand, I am aware...
      • Have you elaborated and explained the opposing side of the issue in detail?
      • Did you refute or Rebut? 
      • Did you explain in detail why the opposing side of the issue should think like you?
      • What transition words did you use?
      • Where can you add transition words?
      • Did you clarify vocabulary words?
      Conclusion:
      • Does your conclusion include a reflection, Connection, and recommendations?
      • What transition words did you use?
      • Where can you add transition words?
      • Who did you make recommendations too?
      • What did you recommend?
      • Did you include a "bow" on top, or finish with a strong statement?





        Have a great day!

        Friday, January 28, 2022

        Day 88: 1/28/22 - Enrichment Project Presentations

         Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will share our enrichment presentations.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from last night

        Homework:

        • No Homework

        Homeroom/Breakfast     10:50 -11:00

        Specials                         11:00 -11:25

        WIN                             11:28 -11:45

        Lunch                          11:45 -12:15

        Block 1                          12:18 -12:55

        Block 2                          12:58 - 1:35

        Block 3                            1:38 - 2:15

        Block 4                            2:18 - 2:55

        WIN                               2:58 - 3:20

        Locker/HR                      3:20 - 3:30

        Dismissal                         3:30


        Activity 1
        Share Enrichment Projects
        Goal:
        Present the information about your topic pertaining to life during the Great Depression, and teach the rest of the class about what you learned. 


        Thursday, January 27, 2022

        Day 87: 1/27/22 - End of Book Exam & Frayer Models

         Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will go to google classroom and complete the End-of-book test.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from last night

        Homework:

        • Finish Frayer Model
        • Finish your Enrichment Project **** Make sure you have shared it with me (digitally) or have arranged for a method of presentation.

        Activity 1
        End of Book Test
        Directions:
        Go to Google Classroom and complete the End of book test.
        The test consists of:
        • 15 multiple choice Questions - 4 Points each
        • 10 True/False - 4 points each
        • 25 Total Questions x 4 pts/each = 100%
        Take your time & DO NOT RUSH!!!
        When you are done go right on to activity #2

        Activity #2
        Frayer (Vocabulary) Models

        Frayer models are a fun simple way to learn new vocabulary.


        Directions:

        • Find a fun, interesting, new, or challenging word
        • Come see me to sign up for your word. Once a word is taken it can not be used again.

        Frayer Models have 6 sections

        1. The word goes in the middle (Big and Bold)
        2. Sentence from the text goes in the top left. Include the page number.
          • Copy the whole sentence. Properly!
        3. The definition of the word goes in the top right. Include the part of speech (Noun, Verb, Adjective, or Adverb)
        4. Synonyms & examples go in the lower left. Synonyms are words that mean the same thing 
        5. Antonyms & Opposites go in the lower right
        6. An Illustration of your word goes at the very bottom 
        Tips:
        • Write big and bold. Fill the space
        • Make sure everything is spelled correctly
        • Write using bold, dark colors. 
        • Color and decorate using light colors, or light shading
        • Be aware of the time and work diligently
        • Do not just copy the definition from the dictionary. Try to fully understand the definition and put it in your own words if you can
        • Be sure you include the part of speech (Noun, verb, adjective, or adverb)
        • You might want to complete the model in pencil first, then go over your work in pen, markers, or colored penc

        Wednesday, January 26, 2022

        Day 86: 1/26/22 - Final Analysis of Bud, Not Buddy & Frayer Models

          Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will review chapter 19 and work on Frayer Models
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from chapter 19

        Homework:

        • Frayer Model
        • Finish your Enrichment Project (Due 1/28)

        Activity #1
        Review Ch 19 Graphic Organizer

        Activity #2
        Frayer (Vocabulary) Models

        Frayer models are a fun simple way to learn new vocabulary.


        Directions:

        • Find a fun, interesting, new, or challenging word
        • Come see me to sign up for your word. Once a word is taken it can not be used again.

        Frayer Models have 6 sections

        1. The word goes in the middle (Big and Bold)
        2. Sentence from the text goes in the top left. Include the page number.
          • Copy the whole sentence. Properly!
        3. The definition of the word goes in the top right. Include the part of speech (Noun, Verb, Adjective, or Adverb)
        4. Synonyms & examples go in the lower left. Synonyms are words that mean the same thing 
        5. Antonyms & Opposites go in the lower right
        6. An Illustration of your word goes at the very bottom 
        Tips:
        • Write big and bold. Fill the space
        • Make sure everything is spelled correctly
        • Write using bold, dark colors. 
        • Color and decorate using light colors, or light shading
        • Be aware of the time and work diligently
        • Do not just copy the definition from the dictionary. Try to fully understand the definition and put it in your own words if you can
        • Be sure you include the part of speech (Noun, verb, adjective, or adverb)
        • You might want to complete the model in pencil first, then go over your work in pen, markers, or colored pencil.

        Have a great day!

        Tuesday, January 25, 2022

        Day 85: 1/25/22 - Bud, Not Buddy Chapter 19

         Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will review chapter 17 & 18 and read chapter 19.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from chapter 17 & 18

        Homework:

        • Read Chapter 19
        • Complete the Responding to Text Graphic Organizer
        • Include T- Chart
        • Finish your Enrichment Project (Due 1/28)

        Activity #1
        Review Ch 17 & 18 Graphic Organizer

        Activity #2
         Read Chapter 19

        Standards:
        RL6.2 'Provide a summary of a text distinct from personal opinions'
        RL6.3 'Describe how a particular story's plot unfolds in a series of events'


        Directions:
        • As we read I want you to underline any new, challenging, or unfamiliar words. 


        Have a great day!

        Monday, January 24, 2022

        Day 84: 1/24/22 - Bud, Not Buddy Chapter 17 & 18

         Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will review chapter 16 and read chapter 17 & 18.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from chapter 16

        Homework:

        • Read Chapter 17 & 18
        • Complete the Cornell Notes
        • Finish your Enrichment Project (Due 1/28)
        Preview Persuasive Essays:

        Topics
        • Bike helmets
        • Healthy School Lunches
        • Vending machines in schools
        • Dress codes
        • Shorter school days
        • Longer school year
        • gun laws
        • Mall curfews for children underage
        • Covid Vaccine Mandates
        • Mask Mandates
        • Remote Learning Policies
        • Minimum Wage

        Activity #1
        Review Ch 16 Graphic Organizer


        A
        ctivity #2
        Buddy Reading Chapter 17 
        Focus: Cornell Notes
        Standards:
        RL6.2 'Provide a summary of a text distinct from personal opinions'
        RL6.3 'Describe how a particular story's plot unfolds in a series of events'


        Directions:
        • As we read I want you to underline any new, challenging, or unfamiliar words. 




        Have a great day!

        Friday, January 21, 2022

        Day 83: 1/21/22 - STAR Assessment #4

         Good Morning 6th Graders,

                  Please make sure you have everything you need. Today we will take the STAR Reading test and see how much you've grown since September.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write tonight's homework in your agenda
        • Take out your grade report
        • Log in to your Chromebook and go to your Clever dashboard
        Homework:
        • Finish Chapter 16

        Activity #1
        STAR Reading Assessment

        To get to STAR:
        Sign in with clever

        Tips to do your best

        • Read carefully
        • Reread when needed
        • Take your time - DO NOT RUSH!!!
        • Read ALL answers before choosing one
        • Use process of elimination

        Expectations:
        • YOU MAY NOT use your chromebook except to complete your STAR test
        • The room should remain silent and you should remain in your seats unless it is an emergency. 
        • When you are done you should close your computer and read your independent reading book or finish chapter 16

        Thursday, January 20, 2022

        Day 82: 1/20/22 - Bud, Not Buddy Chapter 16

         Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will review chapter 15 and read chapter 16.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from chapter 15

        Homework:

        • Read Chapter 16 & complete the Characters Actions Graphic Organizer
        • Include T chart
        • Work on your Enrichment Project (Due 1/28)
        • Get Grade Report Signed
        Activity #1
        Review Ch 15 Graphic Organizer

        Activity #2
        Read-a-loud Chapter 16 
        Focus: Cornell Notes
        Standards:
        RL6.2 'Provide a summary of a text distinct from personal opinions'
        RL6.3 'Describe how a particular story's plot unfolds in a series of events'


        Directions:
        • As we read I want you to underline any new, challenging, or unfamiliar words. 


        Have a great day!

        Wednesday, January 19, 2022

        Day 81: 1/19/22 - Bud, Not Buddy Chapter 15

         Hello Rebels,

                Please make sure you have everything you need and sharpen your pencils. Today we will review chapter 14 and read chapter 15.
                                        Thank you
                                        Mr. Trumble
        Do Now:

        • Write your homework in your agenda
        • Take out your homework from chapter 14

        Homework:

        • Read Chapter 15 & complete the Setting Graphic Organizer
        • Write a minimum of 2 - 3 questions & Create a bulleted list of plot events
        • Work on your Enrichment Project (Due 1/28)
        Activity #1
        Review Ch 14 Graphic Organizer


        Activity #2
        Read-a-loud Chapter 15 
        Focus: Analyzing Setting
        Standards:
        RL6.2 'Provide a summary of a text distinct from personal opinions'
        RL6.3 'Describe how a particular story's plot unfolds in a series of events'


        Directions:
        • As we read I want you to underline any new, challenging, or unfamiliar words. 
        • On the back of your graphic organizer write as many level 2 & 3 questions as you can.
        • Create a list of plot events




        Have a great day!